All Comments on 'The Swim "Meat"'

by One_Two_Nine

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forfun44forfun44over 11 years ago
Not bad, but not great.

Not a bad story, although it was rather short & other than the pissing thing I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

I thought it was great. Came in my pants wishing it was me!

totalbottom56totalbottom56over 11 years ago
Loved it

Would love to have this happen to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Mmmm be fun just need to be longer and more detailed to get me rock hrd!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Speedos

Great story but could be longer and more detail. Write another making the most of the Speedos angle. Guys fucking in (and out of) Speedos is a great fantasy.

XxxRainbowXxxRainbowalmost 11 years ago

I loved this. I would love more to it. Maybe you could do a second one in the pool.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Nice but should be longer and more details. Please give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot

Was really good and I got super horny simply reading it, but if you could create a longer and more detailed sex scene it would be great! But either way, would love to have another story along similar lines.

hungbottomhungbottomalmost 5 years ago
Meat

Did you become their mascot?

TeenTopTeenTopalmost 5 years ago
5-some

It's the privilege of freshmen to get such a thorough treatment.

hungbottomhungbottomalmost 4 years ago
Hot...

Hope to hear more of your next Swim Meet and all of the Swim Meat you get to enjoy again! Wish it was me!

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