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The Swim "Meat"

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by forfun4412/28/12

Not bad, but not great.

Not a bad story, although it was rather short & other than the pissing thing I liked it.

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by Anonymous12/28/12

Awesome

I thought it was great. Came in my pants wishing it was me!

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by totalbottom5612/28/12

Loved it

Would love to have this happen to me!

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by Anonymous12/31/12

Mmmm be fun just need to be longer and more detailed to get me rock hrd!

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by Anonymous06/14/13

Speedos

Great story but could be longer and more detail. Write another making the most of the Speedos angle. Guys fucking in (and out of) Speedos is a great fantasy.

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by XxxRainbow06/14/13

I loved this. I would love more to it. Maybe you could do a second one in the pool.

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by Anonymous02/27/14

Nice but should be longer and more details. Please give us more.

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by Anonymous07/03/16

Hot

Was really good and I got super horny simply reading it, but if you could create a longer and more detailed sex scene it would be great! But either way, would love to have another story along similar lines.

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