by Mr Robert
Cuckolding and humiliation are fetishes. I find nothing in your stories to indicate Loving Wives as the proper category for posting them. Please post them in Fetish. If you post them in Fetish your ratings will almost certainly be higher and you will not have to endure the rude comments.
Thank you for reading my comment.
Have just read all 7 chapters. It moves a bit too quickly perhaps early on, but is probably the best cuckolding story on here. Well done, and thanks.
Should be in Fetish, or BDSM. Not a LW story. Can't imagine why some find this erotic. Seem to be a disproportionate number of the cuckold/wimp/creampie stories coming from the UK these days. Wonder what a shrink would make of this?
Let me repeat that "This story is about cuckolding and humiliation" what part of this does the author not understand? Belongs in BDSM. Well written a 4. But minus 1 for clearly wrong category.
which, as others have pointed out, could fit better in a different category, I'm afraid I have to disagree with those who claimed it was 'well-written.' I found the style to be extremely disjointed and unappealing.
The writing that is. And the actions of the characters in the story. And the husband has gotten to the point of being a giant pile of crap. "Oh God, Oh God?" He isn't even a believable cuckold.