All Comments on 'Between the Vortex of Cunt and Ass'

Between tge vortex of my brain & my penis !! 5-ed

and smooch the taint, TK U MLJ LV NV

5 from me also.

but it shows the degree of the relationship, that of it's nature, being of the importance of air to a deep sea diver

Yet I seem to recall being told that my poems have some elements you think are too personal :-)

This one seems pretty personal to me.....it's older granted........but I like it.

this poem is more descriptive of coitus than a personal poem. A personal poem is one that is a plea or request addressed to another (an intimate love letter), or a poem only fully understood or fully meaningful to only that one person (this poem speaks of "her" not of "you" and is one step away from a personal poem). This poem has no secret message and is easily understood by any adult. But whatever, poets are often the poorest judges of their efforts and I thank you for taking the time to read it. best regards, er