Sagging Boobs, Ugly Nipples Ch. 03

thanks again

Love your work.

Got a kick out of the "obsessive" comment about that SS06 guy up in Detroit, pretty funny. Nice story, told in your usual entertaining style.

Good Read

I am afraid that she did not convince me that she would not turn into a bitch further down the road. She got difficult and nasty too easily and he was too yielding. His reaction was correct.

Entertaining "Style". I like that. Great description...

thanks S33 for the entertaining style comment. I think q nailed it when he went to talk to the therapist, Love and "grudges" last a lifetime. Great writing and story.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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Only four comments? That is strange.

Maybe it is the title, who knows. I like the story - not as strong as "Annie" or selling the car or "Birmingham," but interesting and romantic. Style of this one reminds me of Dinsmore, which is a good thing. I terms of plot, I think I would have had Aunt Norma get knocked up accidentally in her old age - another young'un would have been poetic and been one more big tweak for the lovely ha ha Stella.

the comment about SS06 was hilarious! great story and awesome writing! keep it up!

AND WHEN THE ALARM RINGS

let us all hope we can accept it gracefully and with dignity, TK U MLJ LV NV

Another good one

But I agree with Gator - the title was kind of bad. Glad that Stella got to see the errors of her ways.

Thank you

Once again I've enjoyed a great story that you've written. Thank you for sharing.

I am finding out to my joy that a number of you (pl) out there can write more then just porn. please keep it up you (singular) are very good.

Ed

good story

I liked this story. I know you said at the top of the first page that it was he end, but could you do maybe a tory where Stella finds happynes?

Very Good!! FIVE STARS

Liked the story, especially the references to SS06 & Mustangs (the original American pony car)!

Poor, wretched, dismal Stella. She reminded my of my bitter ex-wife Victoria. A spoiled mamma's girl. Glad I found someone else. Hope Stella (and my Tori) did too.

Liked it up until the last chapter

when Norma turned into an entitled bitch. I think that once they hit that plateau there is not turning back. And then we had the counseling that made Charley to blame for everything, even had him apologizing for her having been such a self serving bitch. I have like most of your stuff that I have read, but it seemed to me that you just lost the will to live on this one. Too bad because it was such a nice story until it wasn't. I won't score it higher than a 2. If I hadn't of liked the first part of it, would have gotten a 1. You write good, but your execution of a poor story was not good.

loved it

got a little mixed up on the last page a bit, but loved it. I don't usually read romance, because one mans treasure is another's garbage. nicely done.

Also Loved It!

“She raged about the unfairness of life” – The problem for Stella is that life ISN’T unfair, she got EXACTLY what she deserved!

"It matters to me. You agreed I could do this, and we are NOT sending it back. That's the end of this discussion!" – Uh-oh! Sounds an awful lot like Stella!

“Had she really become that much of an arrogant, self absorbed bitch?” – Yup!

Why did the baby’s name change? In Ch 2 it was going to be “Norma Marie”, but here you named her “Charlene Norma”.

Responses

@bruce22 – I disagree. First I believe that she understands what she did and will NOT make the same mistake again, BUT, more importantly, Charley has learned to not be such a push-over and to speak up when something important to him is shunted aside.

@pappy7 – No, Charley wasn’t to blame for everything, but he DID bear responsibility for not making his feelings known.

Thank you for a very wonderful story. I run out of words to express myself but your other readers (except for the naysayers) have said it all and better.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

She changed

You changed Sherrie's personality almost overnight. Completely. When that happened, it was over for me. I quit.

Yes

It was a good story. I enjoy a good love story with a positive ending

Kind of quaint and sappy, but still romanctic and fun.

Thanks for the time and effort.