All Comments on 'Knight in Shining... Ch. 01'

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Good story so far, I can hardly wait to see whats next.

Let's see how this goes... ^-^v

reads good, character buildup and the back story a tad abrupt, but ...as I said...reads good....will be waiting for the next chapter.

(heals is a verb referring to physical recovery)... I won't read it.

ignore the cowards who comment without attribution, they are usually just in it to be bitchy, and the one about the tagline, well his loss

I know it's a little rough, but keep in mind that this is my first submission. I'm about halfway through the second chapter which is much longer than this one is. Thank you all for your feedback and I'm glad most of you like it so far!

You could have just skipped it. But you actually took the time out to let it be known you weren't going to read it...wtf?! Pretty pathetic really.

Good story btw!