All Comments on 'A Christmas Party Ch. 02'

I hope him being VP doesn't come back and bite him in the butt with Kachi. She may think he is trying to experiment with her since he never did admit to being the VP when she mentioned it. I think that would be something she should already know concerning the company of her job.

Perks to Naija!! I've been waiting for a story like this!! Yes lol!! I can't wait for the plot to unfold!

I Iove this story!! PIease Iet the next chapter be Ionger...I am so intrigued by what wiII happen next....Great job.

but the parts are so short it's about so interesting as reading a telephone book.

This story is SO cute. Please update again soon. I wonder is Jeremy going to go possessive over Kachi. She is going to be surprised to find out he is the VP.

Nice update . Can't wait to read more .

I'm really enjoying this. I like the fact that they haven't jumped into bed right away. I look forward to seeing where the story goes. Keep up the good work and update the story soon...please!

Thanks lots for the comments guys, appreciate it.

Will make the next chapter longer

I'm interested in seeing how this plays out. I don't care that it's short. One writer here explained that one Literotica page is like 15 or so Word pages. I for one, would rather read 5 quickly updated 1 page chapters than wait 6 months for you to try to come up with one 5 page chapter.

Good second effort.

Five.

I love the way Kachi and Jeremy met. I like Kachi name. It sounds like Kah Chi to me. So, yes, I assumed it was a chinese girl til it got to the description of the clothes and then I was like what kind of name is Kachi for an African woman? What is it's origins? I like it. It was a nice surprise and I like the chemistry between Kachi and Jeremy. Way better second chapter.

Just a tweak or two or three.........

His coloring would suggest Nordic origins, not Greek. The dude that was the elf man in "Lord of the Rings" was sexy smokin' hot, but a glacial kind of beauty. I liked it.

The KGB was Russian security. The Germans had their own group.

Her flavors assailed his tongue would have worked better than attacked. (Just a suggestion)

And of course she would be appealing; she was Nigerian and not an American born black woman. Just one little factor makes her "legally appealing" as opposed to a native born sistah. Perhaps the baggage of history is too heavy a load to bear. The other thing is that this particular scenario does play out in real life. Give a woman of color an accent and she immediately becomes acceptable. Attractively "exotic" as it were so it's ok to date her. Whatever!!!!!

when does the story begin?

It impossible to give a star rating since the story has not yet started.

Ignore this rightbank person who hasn't even written a story of his or her own. They clearly don't know that what you write in Microsoft word could be three pages there, but only one page on Lit. This is awesome so far.

A Greek god who is German and also KGB!?! Huh? FYI, KGB is Russian. I guess you're saying this guy really gets around, to be all 3.

Very first comment ever. I feel like I'm being written about!!! Me likely... When I read getting a life I was so happy(dunno why) but this? I'm shaking my booty here....and you're a really really good writer.....very impressive. If only you won't leave a poor girl hanging though. Keep writing!!!(seriously I might hunt you if you don't....no pressure.)*wink*

All im going to say is GREAT start... just great i see myself in Kachi sooo much lol

I loved the story but was disappointed that the main female character isn't a dark-skinned girl. I'd been looking forward to that since she is Nigerian but I know that colorism plays a role and the caramel toned girls are usually written about. Though I still want to see more books with a beautiful dark-skinned black female character with afro hair since the majority of black women are darker than caramel skin tone and don't have naturally curly hair but have coily hair.