All Comments on 'Little Red & the Huntsman'

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DeviantSinDeviantSinover 11 years ago

That was just awesome!!! You did very well =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

Great job..can't wait for your next story! Keep writing.

LunaScarletLunaScarletabout 11 years ago
Awesome!

More,please!

JendehJendehabout 11 years ago
Very good!

I actually want to know more of what happens. I think there could be a story here beyond the sex too. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
cute and sexy

I really liked it! More, please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
that was amazing!

i can't believe that was your first story! it was really really good =]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yummm

Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good start

could be a bit more filthy...but I liked it all the same...welcome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very good - looking forward to the next one!

thanks - nice work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
proofreading required

good story, nice pacing, but in future, please proofread for errors!!! it may seem anal but it really interrupts the flow when there are words missing or misspelled.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice beginning

But I agree with previous commenter about spelling. It seems like such a little thing, but for someone who reads avidly, it disrupts the flow, and then we're more focused on the editing problems than the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I liked it. 5*****

Thanks for writing and more please. tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent

I really liked this one but agree about the spelling. I disagree with the suggestion that it be more "filthy". I liked the fact that he was dominant and spanks her etc. but also like his tender side. :-) I would definitely like to see more and agree that there could be more to this story than just the sex...but don't stop that!! :-) 5 stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sayonara!

omfg one of the best stories i've ever read! You must continue with the next chapter!

Kristy Feirce

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting

It was unexpectedly sweet for a nonconsent story. I enjoyed it.immensely (:

Anonymous
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