Little Red & the Huntsman

That was just awesome!!! You did very well =D

Fantastic

Great job..can't wait for your next story! Keep writing.

Awesome!

More,please!

Very good!

I actually want to know more of what happens. I think there could be a story here beyond the sex too. Nice job.

cute and sexy

I really liked it! More, please

that was amazing!

i can't believe that was your first story! it was really really good =]

Yummm

Very hot!

good start

could be a bit more filthy...but I liked it all the same...welcome

very good - looking forward to the next one!

thanks - nice work

proofreading required

good story, nice pacing, but in future, please proofread for errors!!! it may seem anal but it really interrupts the flow when there are words missing or misspelled.

Nice beginning

But I agree with previous commenter about spelling. It seems like such a little thing, but for someone who reads avidly, it disrupts the flow, and then we're more focused on the editing problems than the story.

I liked it. 5*****

Thanks for writing and more please. tom anon

Excellent

I really liked this one but agree about the spelling. I disagree with the suggestion that it be more "filthy". I liked the fact that he was dominant and spanks her etc. but also like his tender side. :-) I would definitely like to see more and agree that there could be more to this story than just the sex...but don't stop that!! :-) 5 stars from me.

sayonara!

omfg one of the best stories i've ever read! You must continue with the next chapter!
Kristy Feirce

Interesting

It was unexpectedly sweet for a nonconsent story. I enjoyed it.immensely (: