All Comments on 'Controlled Release'

I really liked it. Keep writing...

The storyline is great, with lots of room to expand...Please continue

Sweet yet still pretty hot

My imagination soars when i see that an author is from Indiana. Well-written and tastefully done. I look forward to to your next offering and my imagining.......

Hope there is more coming. Thanx for your submission.

I liked this first chapter .Can't wait to read more .

A very good first submission. Hope your working on your second one. You might try writing about a shared wife. That always goes over good. good luck.

Interesting start,looking forward to reading more.

What a welcome addition to Literotica!

Three great storues already.

More to come soon I hope.

You did a very good job. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!!!!!

This story is like a teaser. You could turn it into a series.

This is sexy. She's nervous but she wants it and they both enjoy it. More please!!!

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Ssssssmmmmmmooookkkiin'!

11/10!!!!!