All Comments on 'A Lucky Fan Ch. 01'

by eroticjuggalo

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Mojo648Mojo648almost 6 years ago
Review.

Not bad 4 a short story, nice writing, didn't see spelling mistakes, not like many of the stories I've come across, I look forward to the rest of the storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I stopped reading when you started to "sick on" her.

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