All Comments on 'Ishani's Saga: Memorable First Trip Ch. 02'

do keep writing. other than minor errors in tense and grammar, the story is delightful. more so because afaik there aren't too many stories on literotica based on sexual experiments from the sub-continent.

excellent writing,please do continue,but more details needed on ishani's sexy attire,and her love for other man's cock and its cum....keep writing without so much delay....make a detailed build up to these stories,rather than make them a porn affair...its Literotica here,and not slam-bam-thank-u-mam porn !!

Its so fabulous that i just admire your initiative to keep us horny.please keep writing more deeply.Please mail me to parveenrahmankhan@yahoo.com for real group experience.

very erotic

wife and I loved this story

Please write more. You made mycock stiff. I want to meet you.

It's a beautiful, original erotic story, so obviously real. Ishani please continue to write. You have great style and talent. Don't worry about little grammatical errors. They only add to your authenticity.

The visualisation of the words are fantastic. The bengali words really erotisised the situations. I offer to proof read for you for future writings.