by curiouspet
I'm so not a masochist and sadists scare the heck outa me, but I really enjoyed this story. It was so wonderful to read s/m that wasn't psychopathic spank dreck. Two people whose needs match playing hard but with obvious respect and care was a welcome change. Brava! I will be happy to read more of your writing.
This was brilliant, absolutely brilliant. The entire scene felt very real to me; the power practically radiated off my computer screen! I especially loved that you addressed the aftercare and made it touching rather than a compulsory addition.
They care about each other, and while he's very sadistic, he also takes care of her afterward. It isn't rape-y; the sub is enthusiastic to say the least. Well-detailed, very hot, just all-around awesome. Close to perfect. 5 Stars.
It's not often I feel the need to give positive comments for something I'm not into. I don't mind some pain, mostly enduring it for the other's pleasure, I am so not a masochist. This was so well portrayed-such a positive scene for what can be a difficult part of this world for people to grasp. I especially liked that it was rather pure in its subject matter-no humiliation, sharing, major exhibition or other misc. kinks. The inclusion of care after was wonderful. This was about a relationship, not just getting off. Thank you.
As a masochist, this was perfect. I wish someone would treat me like this...
I'm not sure what to say to this beyond good job. It was truly an amazing read. <3
that will make you crave submission. Really. And if not that -- you'll be rushing to get the vibe and new batteries out.
Excellent description and internal dialog. Reads fast, hot, and oh so sexual. A story for the archives. Yeah...maybe it's not a bad way to be! Take care...
Perfect piece of masochistic delight! The obvious enjoyment the Dom takes in inflicting pain just takes me right over the edge. Please please please write more; far too few authors understand this dynamic! Thank you for sharing this!
Great story! The S/M was obviously the main point and that was done well, but there were also a couple of other things I love too (orgasm denial and an intense blowjob), which greatly increased the enjoyment for me.
Riveting....
I have been in this space myself and it made me wish to be there again.
Well done.
The usual bag of tricks, but as you so seductively put it, a special kind of torture. I always find it intriguing that for me at least, raping an ugly or even plain woman is, well, okay. But the very idea of a stunningly beautiful woman--who could have any man or woman she desired--offers her entire being to a sadist for any sort of abuse...
Nothing more attractive in the universe! Limits become meaningless and safewords lose all their power.
One of the best I’ve ever read.. I’ll definitely be back to read again. It was a great description of what sub-space feels like.
Reads as though written by someone who has BEEN there, on one end of the flogger or the other! Excellent!!
X-Man