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Susi's Boyfriend

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by Anonymous

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by sirhugs01/06/13

So Short

I wanted more...

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by DesertLust01/07/13

more detail

It seems your story isn't finished. You need a couple more layers of detail to it. Like actual sex with uncle. I like the innocent naive girl with the dominant man -- just more detail.

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by Anonymous01/07/13

Not bad

Ignore all nasty comments, no one forced them to read. I LIKED it aswell. To the Bitch anon who sad the other person who liked it aswell was a retard, why don't you go fuck yourself. Just because someone likes something you did not does not mean their stupid. Do not stop writing. People can be cruel for no reason at all, thats what the delete button is for.

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