by rhev
interesting premise. good writing and character development. this could easily go to twenty chapters and never lose a beat if you keep up this level.
i'll certainly be looking forward to what comes next.
Although it was a bit short, I like how it set the stage and your creative idea of hidding his true name in his mind was truly unique. I'm am and going to enjoy this story.
So far so good! You obviously can write. The story is very original with a lot of promise!! Can't wait to start reading next chptr, so I won't!!