All Comments on 'Old World Magic Ch. 03'

by rhev

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
FerrumitzalFerrumitzalabout 11 years ago

interesting premise. good writing and character development. this could easily go to twenty chapters and never lose a beat if you keep up this level.

i'll certainly be looking forward to what comes next.

GhestaGhestaabout 11 years ago
more please?

I'm hooked please keep the story coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
?

that was way to short

DmitryDmitryabout 11 years ago
I love smart

writers. You are one of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
the start.

Although it was a bit short, I like how it set the stage and your creative idea of hidding his true name in his mind was truly unique. I'm am and going to enjoy this story.

newfield1981newfield1981almost 10 years ago
so far......

So far so good! You obviously can write. The story is very original with a lot of promise!! Can't wait to start reading next chptr, so I won't!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Those stories told in kindergarten :O

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous