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I loved it so much! My only complaint is that it was too short. I hope the next update is soon. *wink wink*
Oops
A couple inconsistancies. A couple or more mistakes.
Sorry about that. Let's just pretend they aren't there, shall we?
;)
~A
What mistakes?
Loved the chapter, and the flow of this story. My only complaint? Too much time between chapters! Hope the next one is out soon and things get more personal between John and Blue.
Happy New Year!
re: Mistakes
Shhhhhh.... I'm pretending they aren't there.
;)
Happy New Year to you also!
~A
CUTE
I enjoy the teasing between the two. I hope we get an update soon. Can't wait for the next step.
More please!
Ardella,
We love this story. I love this story. Please keep writing, night and day and post more. Please?
Thanks and happy new year.
So I imagine the next chapter will be...
Keep it comin' Cookie! I love the flow and pace of this- and actually less mistakes than I've seen in a lot of professional stuff!
Oh, that's right, I'm biased... still- moremoremore! Take your time- QUALITY!
xoxoxo
Cruel...
to make us wait for more steamy goodness. Wow. Cute, funny, and tantalizing. Can't wait for more. Hopefully soon.
One word...LOVE!!!
Keep this story coming. Love this one.
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