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by Anonymous04/10/07

What Kind Of Crap Is This?????

Do you have some dark, and deep desires that the rest of us ought to know about? Was your hubster or boyfriend harmed by his ex and then die on you? Cause this was some sick shit. Not to mention the middling-poor spelling. And the shortness of the story. Now. If his death had been followed by her escape; and the "gang"! If the "Gang That Couldn't Come Straight" had been tracked by a big and good-looking cop who breaks in to rescue Sarah, and found and tortured, then so much the better for the plotline. Cause as it was, it's hopeless. "Off to her new life with her captors". Really!!
What an exercise in first efforts. But keep in mind that fantasies like these aren't forgotten, and I'll not be reading yours ever again.

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by Anonymous07/30/07

Great!

Thanks!

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