All Comments on 'Shivers, Chills and Lesbian Thrills'

I hope you continue this story, as I would love to read more of it.

If this is your first attempt, I can't wait to watch your writing skills develop. Please continue to build the longer story you plan.

You did a lovely job. I think the passion was wonderful. Brings back memories :)

I like it - please continue

That reminds me of my first time , please continue

Sensitively done - great!

lovely and sensative I look forward to the next chapter

brilliant cant wait for second chapter

Great start. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep posting please.-ChristieP

That was absolutely thrilling. I'm a lesbian myself :) that was exciting fabulous work

for your frist times grate just finsh it .Looking forwoard ot the rest mmmmmm ty leann xxc

Good story! There's a younger beautiful of legal age, female that I would love to do this to. I hope I get that chance someday, cause damn shes fine!

Fantastic story! I would LOVE to read more about this one.