All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 01'

Way to go girl. I can tell you have a dirty mind and the story's well written. Loved the build up during school. Walking around without panties makes you so hot. Can't wait until he teaches her about oral and spanks her for flashing his buddies. Keep IT up as I look forward to your next effort.

beautifully paced and wonderfully hot. I hope you will continue Lori's adventures;)

Really enjoyed this cant wait for more !

A bit rush towards the end and you need to proofread it to make it perfect.

Anyway, looking forward to Ch. 2.

in junior high and high school. We never completed the deed due to the things along the line but we were very special friends and she was my dirty girl. Very well done story tell us more about their adventures.

Excellent story! really enjoyed the read. I look forward to future episodes in this storyline!

mmmm hurry up and make ch 2!! My pussy is sooo wet!

Lori is pretty likeable, but maybe a bit too full on to be real. Good writing, just a little bit of proof reading and all good.

Too bad I didn't have a dirty girl friend like Lori in high school. My grades would have fallen like a rock, but it would have been worth it. Wow, a great story--and there are more chapters that I want to read. Thanks for posting.

Lori is a girl after my own heart. Can't believe I just found this series. I wish I were staying home today, I'd have plenty of dirty girl moments reading it all.

Lori surely knows haw to get an adolescent lad into a total conniption.

I fell in love with a wonderful 'dirty girl'

A beautifully told story and very sexy

This was a well written, excellent story. Nicely paced and very sexy. Thanks for writing.

You have one in Chapter Two as well.

When it's extreme, the second O gets added.

ToO hot.

ToO juicy..

ToO perfect. (Like this story! :+))

Lori is NOT a dirty girl.

She's a MIRACLE!!

Where can I find her???!!!