First Time at the Gyno

palpitate?

It should be palpate. But great story.

Unusually erotic description of Gynologist's naturally invasive 'equipment', suposedly to examine internal female receptiveness. Sensitive & caring treatments, yet designed to thrill readers of both sexes? Voted 5 stars.

Apart from 'Carrie's' anal exam being unnecessary, in the circumstances of checking for frigidity, most readers must realise erotic detail has purposely tittilated younger male 'porn' readers into normalising 'Anal' entries, purely for this talented writer's vote-gathering purposes?

I quite enjoyed this story.

Very Erotic

Great stand alone although would love another chapter detailing next months visit! The Doc has certain Dom characteristics, it could be the making of another great multiple part story like your Submission (a personal favorite of mine) . Thank you. M.

Interesting that the subject of Travis being completely incompetent as a lover is never broached, and she even thinks it's partially her fault. Really? So much for sexual awakening, she's still retarded. Good story otherwise.

Good characters, detail & balance

Great story. I like that you give her a legitimate reason to be in that situation. Your descriptions are good, too. Another thing I really liked was that the emotional rollercoaster of her 'awakening' is really well developed - it feels real. Best of all I like that you managed to create a situation where the dominance was achieved through the confidence of the doc's mind, rather than the same old 'shut up and fuck me' spankings (yawn). In a world where most stories are a pretty unpolished, this one is really great! Thanks.

Yet again

Another beautiful work angel you really got the mix of character and sex right. And I know he is not your typical Dom coz Patrick would have his head for forcing an unwilling participant into their world, it that's why I love your stories you don't just stick to one type of character. Can't wait to your next work.

Wonderful

This was yet another great story from you. Even though I prefer my doctors' stories with more realistic doctors in stead of hunks, this story had me going all the way through. Thank you. I really hope you make it a series.

Good quickie

I enjoyed this as a quickie story... I am used to 8 chapter plus stories. I look forward to more new stories! ;) PS: Being the Maid was beautiful. I'm sure you have heard the news.

Um...

I think it's time to find myself a male gynecologist! ;-)

You have to write a chapter 2

, now that she's on birth control and all .

5 stars

Great story! Yet another example of why you are one of my favorite writers.

start. a series

This is so good. I would love to see spin off stories/chapters from this. That would be aewsome!

loved it

Would love to read next months visit!!!

This story made my clit so hard I had to masturbate