All Comments on 'Quagmire of Quantum Quandary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wait what??

He just tossed this device into the river!?!? that just doesn't seem right. I enjoyed your story all the way until the end your main character is now no longer gonna be able to be your main character. However still an interesting story so I'll wait for your next instalment hopefully you will try to male your next story a little longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent Story

Please keep writing! I'd like to read more about him discovering how to use the device. Does he ever come across a hot new mom? Waiting for the next part.

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Amazing plot

A very inventive storyline! Time travel and detective work; it can't get much better than that. I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Magyar1921Magyar1921over 11 years ago
Always a Fan

Always a fan of the well written time stop stories and this has an excellent beginning to it. Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please continue!

Enjoyed this story very much. Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Continue...

...Please! Hope you haven't given up on this story! Hope you're working in the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Would love to read more

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