Hot, and steamy, what can I say, I have read the first two chapters and I am loving this. I am just having to read on more. You have a great way with words, and found that the sex scenes were done very well, and wish my own were in this league. Outstanding job.
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Anonymous04/11/13
Wow is a poor word if it is one, but I can't seem to find one that describes this amazing story. thanks.
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just read part 1 and then part 2,,,,, this is a good story.... thanks for writing x
Outstanding job.
Hot, and steamy, what can I say, I have read the first two chapters and I am loving this. I am just having to read on more. You have a great way with words, and found that the sex scenes were done very well, and wish my own were in this league. Outstanding job.
Wow is a poor word if it is one, but I can't seem to find one that describes this amazing story. thanks.
Wow powerful
I was moved to almost tears in their devotion to each other. I love the way you put this. Very moving and didn't take me long to get horny
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