Found this chapter slightly improved over the first one. Both well written and a pleasure to read. The first one I gave a four, yet this one received five stars. Looking forward to more of these nice change of pace in describing how to seduce women.
Really enjoying these stories, keep it up!
Check consistency of names.
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Nice Chapter
Found this chapter slightly improved over the first one. Both well written and a pleasure to read. The first one I gave a four, yet this one received five stars. Looking forward to more of these nice change of pace in describing how to seduce women.
Great!
Really enjoying these stories, keep it up!
Karen?
Check consistency of names.
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