All Comments on 'The Escapist Ch. 02'

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KazuKazuover 11 years ago
Fun Story

I like this series so far and I hope your next chapter gets released soon.

EdwarusEdwarusover 11 years ago
Like it

Cant wait to see how he gets out of this one great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The branding was a bit much...

Fairly good altogether though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

The story is awesome and I cant wait to see what you come up with next. If you are taking requests for which monster girl we would like to see I would love to see a wasp or minotaurus. Please release the next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awsome

Verry sweet story so far ! , keep up the good work :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please

This is an awesome story. I esp like the fact that he's found a mate in a dragoness. It would be great if you could add more between him and the dragoness like more sexual positions and oral sex.

Also how about doing a story with a mermaid and a sphinx?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More.

I want more. Simple as that. One thing I would like to see is the slime girls and maybe an angel girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
excellent!

Excellent! I would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Nice new series though I would like to see the return of monster girl adventure

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Execellent Story!!!!!!!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for more chapters........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
excelent

this is a fantastic story and more need to be so briliantlr written as this one

HurbsterHurbsterabout 11 years ago
Very nice but...

Good stuff. Enjoyed most of it. Maybe a little to much sneering on the Monster Girls side, that becomes annoying after having read this after your other Monster Girl story where they all seem to have a really shitty attitude towards blokes. I guess as I'm not into femdom it all blends after a while. Dominant female after dominant female becomes a bit blah eventually.

And um, he seemed to forgive the Dragoness rather quickly after SHE FECKING BRANDED HIS SCROTUM. Just saying is all.

timebomber427timebomber427about 11 years ago
Hurbie

Remember, he subconsciously wanted it. So... Yeah. Easybake oven.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Dude....

great story man cant wait for more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SCROTUM BRANDING?!?!?!...

What da hell?... How did he subconsciously want that to happen to him?... You don't just cardarize mans junk! that's just wrong... Good story though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
comment by Loves2Spooge

Loving the story, though there's one thing you keep messing up on, whether you know it or not. You keep throwing the term 'rape/raping' around like it's candy, and while in most cases, the term is the right term for that situation, there are other times you use it when it isn't what you say it is. When Akaria and the two other girls were having sex with him, you can't say it was rape since he clearly wanted it. There's a phrase that is so true, it's basically common sense- 'You can't rape the willing.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Scrotum Branding.

I don't understand why people are complaining, I mean, sure it would hurt like hell. But being marked as a dragons property would feel great. I absolutely love dragons and glad this one came to a more happy ending for the dragoness. (Who would want to leave such a lovely beauty, who is so caring. Considering most of the others are more dangerous in a deadly way.) Also take into consideration what the others are saying, mostly about the "rape" term being used in improper places. Still it was a great read!

SPARTAN047SPARTAN047over 8 years ago
Akaria is our saviour! :P

CBT or other painful practices give me the chills, but I enjoyed him finally getting a cute protector. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Someone ripped off your story

There is a user "PumpkinDukeXD" on Wattpad that is stealing works from other authors en masse. Please check this link and make sure you report him to the Wattpad admins:

https://www.wattpad.com/603868324-unpopular-monster-girl-stories-yandere-dragon/page/3

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