All Comments on 'See You at the Office'

Because he or she writes as though he/she has not passed the third grade. Even if this is because English is not his or her primary language, find and use a competent editor! I forced myself to read the first two or three sentences before I gave it up as hopeless.

in the intro I went straight to post a one.

so she's a wild child with a hookup partner, and is still a virgin? This is not a first time sex story, these two seem to know way more than they should for two virgins. Not to mention the lack of editing and irrelevant story line.

TSIA

your story could have been so much more instead its just a wham ,bam,not even a thank you mam

but keep trying

jamesoffl