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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Loved the chapter. My only complaint would be about the cow. If the cow isn't able to produce a calf, and therefore calve, she can't produce milk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great!!

I'm really enjoying this story and I think its great that you update so regularly. Thank you. I kinda wish the chapters were longer, all these short chapters make the story seem choppy. Otherwise this is one of my favorites. Can't wait to read more!!

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 months ago

I wondered about the cow that never calved feeding others but a minor point in an excellent piece.

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I'm a 37 year old woman. I've been writing since I was big enough to hold a pencil. All kinds of works. Anywhere from fantasy and history, to modern, to the most erotic fantasy scene I get in my head. My writing comes from a delightful mix of personal experiences that are very...

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