Rob's Revenge Ch. 03

Nice People

Well written and kept my attention even though I really would not like to change places with the, err , protagonist.

Get a DNA test

She decides to get revenge by doing twosomes and threesomes? Rather extreme, no? And she was a 'good girl' prior to that? Just seems a little...off. Best to be sure immediately.

He knows the risks and has decided to assume them. The pre nupt does actually give him some protection too. But decidedly not my idea of a marriage.

Thanks for sharing.

A Story Like a Cruise in a Classic Ford Cobra Muscle Car Softly Rumbling Down Open Road !

A young Steve McQueen could play the lead in this one. It's not about the destination, but the style in which you ' Getaway ' . Who knows that better then JPB and SMQ?

Unique and Interesting and well written as usual

Worth keeping this one alive for a couple more chapters

And they lived happily ever after.

unlikely

Excellent

One of the best tales ever written. Will you continue the series???

I hope.

A LOT OF WATER UNDER THAT BRIDGE

and water is a good cleanser, TK U MLJ LV NV

The short answer is NO!

They will not live happily ever after. His sweet little slut's statement that she still wanted to do threesomes of foursomes all but guarantees she will not be faithful regardless of her disclaimer. Any woman who is a slut, or has cheated on her fiancee or husband, will do it again repeatedly. Women do not have fidelity or loyalty in their genetic makeup. (That is one of the reasons they do not make good soldiers.)

Anxiously waiting !

Looking forward to Chapter 4 JP Bob

interesting story

i like the respect for the protagonists shown by the story - both are "stick to their promises" type of people.

Chapter 4? Maybe - JPB does like his creampies... and groups.

Personally, I think it should stop here - a bit of domestic tension isn't necessarily bad, as it can keep things interesting. Leading the story to trains would cheapen the story to date.

Green-something

You had a good thing going, but ...

if this is the end, then you blew it. Fidelity is born of love and respect, which these two clearly don't have for each other. I thought Rob's somewhat robotic and unemotional protrayal was a nice touch as I saw it as a consequence of his experience with his first wife. Dropping it and trying to make him a faithful loving husband is bogus and ruins the story's credibility. Same goes with Connie. She got back at him for dumping her, but her continued disrespect for him by fucking other men after the engagement and serving him sloppy seconds because he "owed" her that flies in the face of her assertions of faithful love. People can and do exact such revenge, but not to someone they are so in love with. Also, she gets pissed at the women who proposition Rob, but tells him flat out she would like to continue fucking other men if he will come along for the ride. No way this ends well. My bad rating is because this seems to be the end. If you have a chp 04 in the wings, then maybe I will revise my opinion.

3 chapters for that ending...

... JPB, you sucked me in again. When will I ever learn.

I am happy

that you turned the commenting and scores back on. I appreciate your writing skill. I thought the last two stories were among the strongest and best you have ever written. They only lacked a little of the wit I have come to expect of your work. This was a definate ***** performance.

A Little Far-Fetched, But...

...people do stupid shit for bad reasons every day. Because people aren't perfect, you know?

I've seen successful marriages out in the real world that were started with far flimsier underpinnings than the relationship in this story. I'd say the odds of something bad happening to this marriage are no worse than average. Which is to say, 50/50.

And I wouldn't mind a sequel, if JPB decides there's another story worth telling.

What a Hoot

Fun read....thanks

Enjoyed it, but . . .

I do admit this was a fun and interesting read. However, I don't see any authentic love being built between these two. Certainly not enough to try and drop a cliff hanger on us. Where's the suspense? "Or did they?" Really? Given the foundation of their marriage there is no way they will live happily ever after. Additionally, you have surrounded them with the most lecherous group of people to ever gather together in one place. The mother . . . The father . . . All of her co-workers . . . Even the guy himself is lecherous. This marriage is doomed. Thanks for the entertaining, albeit unrealistic tale.

OK

Hubby and Sweetie grew to like each other before he initiated his payback program for Daddy. He is aware that she had a lot of reason to want to hurt him back. She is aware that he thought he had a lot of reason to want to hurt her Daddy. She is also aware that when he find out the whole truth, he was willing to take responsibility for his misbehavior! It is entirely possible, as they live together, they will disclose their underlying love to each other.

My concern with the development of the characters is that most of the main players are remarkably rational in their discourse, but emotional in their behavior choices. It was a delightful read, nonetheless!

5*

you are a very sick man and i am waiting for wifey to decide she needs 4 at a time again. you are a more than very sick you are disturbed. the world needs more like you - 5
NOW FINISH THE STORY YOU POSTED BEFORE YOU DID THIS ONE!

If I'm honest

I enjoyed the first two parts more than this one. This just left too many questions unanswered and it really was stretching credulity to have so many females longing for a sot at the same man. It ended up being a very male-oriented story, with the females being drawn according to a somewhat twisted fantasy.
I'd give the other episodes four stars - this one I won't mark.

Great job as usual

I'm not sure this one is on par with classic JPB stories but it was fun and it's better than anything else out here. Over the x-mas holiday my wife and I reread all 694 of your other stories. I think she's starting to appreciate you a little. Anyway great job as usual SS06

Four Instead of Five

Because...

She went from being straight, totally, emotionally and romantically in love with him to not just dating (fucking) but being a slut about it.

Okay, she gave a reason But - when they got back together he felt remorse, apologized and I believe assured her that the feelings they once had for each other were very real so...

...she bangs three guys on their announcement party and tells him it was a one time thing in revenge, not right, she already had her sex toys fun and now they were going to work things out and be happily(?) married.

She continues to cheat, they talk about the past and the future while on the honeymoon, she is respectful at the Company oarty, he redeems his manhood and respect with her fuck toys, and they decide they'll be okay.

Not, she has not, will not and never forgive him for he did. Even though, she understood his past conduct, she does know that he really cares about her and that's the problem because the closet slut is in presence and she will go at it again...eventually and possibly on and off again, now what?

Of course, we all know what I've written so I guess I'm just throwing my two cents in, I did read all three chapters and am really thankful that you didn;t turn him into a useless wimp/wuss and cuckold. We all know you delight in throwing that one out.

Anyway, Thanks again - you're my number one author to follow.

A great story

Well done.

The only trouble I see in there relationship is he will always have to have her under surveillance to make sure she keeps her word and she doesn't fuck around on him.

Of course he could give her the ultimatum of if she does cheat , he will take the child and she will never see him again.

Thanks for the good read.

Well done JPB.

We are not big fans of yours but these last two stories have been fleshed out pretty darn good and not nearly as wimpy as the majority of your stuff.

Thank you again

Another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading all 3 chapters.

Very Well Done!

All three chapters were invigorating, and for perhaps the first time on Literotica, I was thrown for a loop at the direction they took. Five stars.

DID THEY?

Seriously, is there more? The last line made me really curious now, what happens next? Maybe Connie tries her hand at being sneaky again, or maybe those three idiots attempt to drug, gang bang and blackmail her for sex and money? Or what if her dad really does die and Maggie tries to move in on Rob? The possibilities are boundless and extremely entertaining, please let there be more.

Neither character is sympathetic

Neither character is sympathetic. What he did - trying to impregnate his foe's innocent daughter - was vile and was set as to hurt someone who hadn't hurt him at the time. But she wasn't made into a sympathetic character either...

Do they make it together on the long run? I seriously doubt it...

As to what louguy35 said: that was utter denigrating rubbish.

Ol Bob

Here we have ol Bob, a guy who is so insensitive in his relationships with his wives and girlfriends that they can have multiple affairs over long periods of time and he doesn't have a clue. He should be called Boob, not Bob. But wait. He is so alluring to women other than his wife or girlfriend that just about every woman he comes in contact with can't keep from throwing herself at him and all beg him to have an affair. What rubbish! He must be a skank attractor and normal women must run from this moron?

Ahh, yesss.

In most other LW stories, Rob would have had a 3 or 4 some with Jessica, Maggie, and the other wife. Love the direction toward fidelity this story took. Totally the opposite of the usual direction. I would love to see a continuation of this story and hope that it keeps going. However, if it DOES continue, I see infidelity in the future.

good one

good one bob, i bet this one was reeeeally hard for you, keeping the husband relatively decent as he didnt fuck his wife one last time before throwing her out and came out to his new wife before the marriage by not trying to conceal his original motives and he did take her over the top revenge rather well, another thing that was probably hard for you to write about is that there are (also relatively) decent people in this world like the father/ex lover and other people but of course you had to add your signature which is the wives and the husbands who would fuck others at the drop of a hat, excellent story that worth a five, thanks for sharing.

So.... are we gonna

See chapters 4+?

Hope so.

Thx.

great story great ending

As the storyline showed Rob and Connie were comfortable with a traditional relationship. There was couple at the very end who were swingers; traditional or other relationship styles should be determined by the couple themselves. The benefits of a relationship are determined by the those participating. Relationships are determined by what the people involved decide they want it to be with mutual assent amongst parties. Some people need multiple partners and have a core base usually with the traditional two. This story showed the advantages of standing your ground to get the relationship you are most comfortable in your own skin. I found myself all over the map with this one. Since,I have tried various styles open.and traditional. For myself, I found that no matter what you chose communication and emotional comfort of your partner should be the stabilizing factor of a solid relationship. Rob wanted honesty and respect in this story Connie seemed to respect that and explained that her reason for having multiple sex partners was the revenge factor due to Rob's poor treatment in Rob's pursuit of her father and using her as a pawn in Rob's dirty game. Connie's mother saw the behavior and reported same to Rob seemingly have her own motivations, however she yielded to the situation and was forthcoming in her reports to Rob. The summary of that action perhaps was to aid Rob and her daughter at the same time. I truly believe this author intended this story to end well with Rob being the man of his house and Connie being the woman. I think Connie would've cuckolded Rob if he was a different man but he wouldn't have and Connie loved Rob and visa versa and they wouldn't compromise their love.

Did they?

Really? Last line, Or Did They?
Wooooow. Trying to lather on the suspense a little heavy, huh?

Yes, she will fuck around, he will divorce her and take up with her Mom.

That is my prediction if there is another chapter, that's how I would write it. I hope he beats the crap out a couple more men, too.

Still waiting on Chapter 4.

My prior prediction still holds. A good story, I can see myself as Rob, LOL. Our principles are close to being the same.

Change of Character?

He was/is the monogamous type. Discovering the facts/reality of his first wife's conduct he was devastated. Not so much that he was a fool but because he loved her so much and the shock was beyond hurtful. JPB you didn't write that but it is obvious and why...

...because, realizing the harm he had placed on Ms. Barrington, how wrong he was, he knew he owed her an explanation and to do right by her. Also, he really did care for her so, when he discovered that she had played and quote 'kept me company when you left' and considering the number of calls she made attempting to reach him, he had to think - I know I did...she was UNFAITHFUL and not knowing that she wouldn't get him back, starting sleeping around! Can you say slut and - slut isn't in his needs or desires for a mate!

Well, JPB, good story. Like a romantic I would have hoped she hadn't slept around and that they actually ended rekindling their love and life and/or - he catches her still at it, cuts her off from sex, they maintain an image of happily married for everyone and he spends his life enjoying Maggie - Makes more sense!

Thanks as always.

This!

This is why JPB is the Undisputed King of Twisted. Right here.

5 HUGE Stars

Great Ending

It is always easy for anyone to give in to the real "Prime Directive". The challenge is to consider the feelings of spouses and keeping the promises given to them. It is always refreshing to read a story in which the characters change their behaviors when married. I appreciated Rob and Connie being committed and married, but not yet in love. It seemed to me that eventually they would end up in love. I hope so. Great ending.

Good Story

At last, a long JPB story with a strong male lead. At first I thought he was a real bastard but the plot played out nicely with clever twists and nuances that made for a highly entertaining read. Would like e Ch.4, but 3 ended on a positive note and I'd hate to see a break-up. Kudos!

hail the king !

A gem of a story from the king of twisted.

ONLY TIME WILL TELL

and the Reaper is just around the dial. TK U MLJ LV NV

What? And they lived happily ever after. Or did they?

JPB you need to work on developing your story endings.

JPB never ceases to amaze

Fucked-up, twisted story but throughly enjoyed reading. Tw0Cr0ws got it right - King of the twisted. Thanks for writing...

Dammit, another late night!

I just couldn't put it down. Thanks for a great read!

Not a chance in hell do they live happily ever after.

She's going to work at the Company and constantly have those guys chasing after her. Eventually, they'll get her. And if they do then at least two of the wives will be chasing after Rob and they'll get him for sure. And then there's the Mother-in-law waiting in the wings and scheming to get back into Rob's bed. With all the plotting ans scheming going on, someone is going to cave. Another fine, convoluted plot by JPB. Sure do wish he'd write a sequel but I won't hold my breath.

One of your best stories, JPB, at least for me.

I will look on your page to see if I can find a follow up. Thank you for writing.

total shit

Never wed a woman that whores herself. A wife out and a slut in the bedroom is the golden goose. A whore for others will always be a whore.

I agree -

one of JPB's best. How could our hero be so lucky as to wind up with two total sluts? If Connie does reawaken the slut within, does he go for divorce, open marriage or swinging together? The last would get in the way of fucking Maggie....So many options for a sequel. Needed more tags to enable me to find this story again.

Happily ever after? I don't think so!

While this was an excellent story, it was a story about a bunch of cheaters and lowlifes, start to finish. There isn't a sympathetic character to be found - ANYWHERE! I'm still laughing at all the bed hopping and planned cheating that was going on right until the story ended. I don't think Connie makes it 6 months before she's back to her gang bangs. And I think Rob will be back with her Mother soon. The divorce and fall out would make an interesting sequel. I wonder if Marge figures out a way to kill off Barrington, takes control of the Company and then takes control of Rob? So many delicious possibilities!

so much for aesop

I already knew that all women are that way Scotty