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Like
Make this a series
I echo
What the previous guy wrote. Definitley make it into a mini-series.
I concur
With the the other two, make it a series
Make that four
It would make a nice start to a series if you felt so inclined. Enjoyed it as is.
grinning...
I don't want to say I told you so... but... I did. Now hurry up with the new chapters... people are anxiously waiting!
A five*****
from me. Intriguing and definitely deserves some more chapters.
Thank you kindly
for your comments. I wasnt sure there would be any interest in this story but due to your encouragement, the second chapter will be submitted within a week or so. Thank you again. It is sincerely appreciated.
~Lem
Great Start
Please continue it is the start of a great story
Bravo - 5 Stars
Most enjoyable read and visuals. Great characters and I hope that you will continue writing.
space the final frontier...
I don't usually read space odyssey's but i enjoyed this one good job :)
If my boner had a hand...
It would give you a thumb up
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