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Pour me a cup of your whim
What a delightful story!!! Absolutely believeable ... wonderful surprise at the end!! Well done!!
Shades of Byron
She writes in beauty like a lovely night
with nubile beauties for our delight
Okay, so Byron didn't write erotica--or did he? If so, nothing like this little gem. Perfect!
More, girl, more!
Pout
Thank you so much!! You have a little gem of talent there, and having read all your work, it's clear your talent extends to all your pieces... The story was amazingly skilled and you hid the plot twist so well at the end!! Its rare for something so beautifully simple to be so craftily hidden!! Thank you so much for letting us share in your beautiful talent.
E xxx
More Than Perfect
This little daydream is more than perfect. Thank you for sharing your delightful Whim with us. I look forward to to reading more ... and real soon too!!
Really liked it and it was a surprising improvement over your first story. I liked the suppense at the end promising more to come.
Not Bad
A little short, would love to see what happens next!
Dream on
Perchance to dream. Or, perhaps, a spooky foretaste!
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