I hope u post the next chapter soon I want know how this story continues
So far, this story seems very interesting. I love the way you develop your themes and plots. You clearly are a talented writer.
I have only one concern. I myself enjoy a good bw/wm interracial story, but I hope that this isn't the lead up to her getting a lesson in true from a white man after being brutalized by a black man.
As I said, I love interracial stories involving bw and wm, being a black woman with a white husband. But I do feel that making the black men look like the enemy isn't a requirement for explaining why a black woman would choose a white man. This is just my opinion though. I'll still continue reading your stories because I really do enjoy your story telling skills.
This story was very real and very sad and cruel. The characters seemed fuzzy and cutesy and very much consumed in a loving and caring relationship. The apparent rape should've carried consequences even a potential revenge sequence. The writer gave us a 360 on the anatomy of this horror. The girl Regina clearly communicated her position in this matter regarding her desire to remain a virgin. Bradley showed no signs to the reader that he was such a scumbag. This story begs for a sequel.
To make Bradley get what's coming to him.
They were so cute...I was hoping it was going to be reluctant and then she would want it. This is so sad, he betrayed her. The writing was good though
. I have tears in my ears right now from reading this, I don't know whether its from the realization that this actually happens or if I can feel Regina's pain. This was not interracial love, this was violent brutal rape of an innocent young superior black woman by an inferior white devil who has to rape to feel power.
I want to cry for her :(
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