It's nice to see a new writer making such a promising start - this was pretty good, as I said above. Thank you, welcome to Literotica and a Happy New Year - I hope we will be seeing much more of your work in 2013. Four stars.
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Anonymous01/05/13
hot!!!
I'm a young female, loved this one - I like the male POV and domination and degrading text. Good writing and to the point - worked for me...
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Anonymous01/05/13
Loved it
I really like the way the guy checks for willingness on her part and then has his way. please site more.
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Anonymous01/05/13
Really, really nice...
My wife and I really (!) liked it and played out our own version! What a night - and following afternoon. Nicely done!
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Anonymous01/06/13
AMAZING.
I ABSOLUETY LOVED IT. 5 stars all the way. Please write more.
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Pretty good ...
It's nice to see a new writer making such a promising start - this was pretty good, as I said above. Thank you, welcome to Literotica and a Happy New Year - I hope we will be seeing much more of your work in 2013. Four stars.
hot!!!
I'm a young female, loved this one - I like the male POV and domination and degrading text. Good writing and to the point - worked for me...
Loved it
I really like the way the guy checks for willingness on her part and then has his way. please site more.
Really, really nice...
My wife and I really (!) liked it and played out our own version! What a night - and following afternoon. Nicely done!
AMAZING.
I ABSOLUETY LOVED IT. 5 stars all the way. Please write more.
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