by DepthsOfDuality
Well written and nicely descriptive, but I didn't care for the forced aspect and lack of safe word.
Yeah, I wasn't sure whether to put this in BDSM or the forced category. I'm sorry
You feel I chose poorly.
I view BDSM as a kind of transformational journey, I was playing with the concept of "turning" a human being.
Although it was a very interesting story to read, it was EXTREMELY forced. There wasn't exactly a mutual agreement - the character was a bit confused and shocked and drugged. I don't think that BDSM is necessarily about taking advantage. But I'm a newbie so I could be incorrect.
Overall though, it was very interesting to read and was well written. Keep writing; you're good at it!
I could have gone on reading, but you stopped as you warmed to the subject (no pun intended). I think you have more to share and would like to see it.
Fear not, rdoolittle, chapter 2 is written and chapter 3 is approaching completion. It think I'll release them simultaneously in the next week. Trust me, it'll get way better from here. Part 2 is my favourite story so far. I'll put it in forced this time :P