Dunn In Ch. 05

Yep

Yes, you do suck. I can't believe this chapter was only one page. Waiting for the next one.

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Yes you do suck. The end of Ch. 4 had someone watching and Ch. 5 starts with a telephone call ----Who was at the door in Ch. 4 and who was with him/her?

Cut Niemand some slack.

During this series, Niemand has asked for feedback, to tailor the story to what his readers would like to see next. At the end of Chapter 4, we were presented with a cliff-hanger. I have to admit, I'm as much in suspense as anyone else about who was watching from the doorway. But with all the responses he was given, this is a nice (if extremely brief) offering to allow him time to incorporate the suggestions we all gave. It also answers the question about how he became involved, sexually, with his mom.

I've come to look forward to each new chapter in this series, and I hope he's able to stretch it out quite a bit more. With luck, we'll soon find out who that was watching him fuck his kinky daughter in a supposedly empty house. I urge everyone to be patient and give him the chance to let this wonderful story unfold at it's own pace.

Agree with "Somethinginthewayshemoves" comments.

A fresh new author that is open to plot suggestions is a good thing - thank you author. Otherwise all we get is that wimp/slut bullshit from Doodoo and MattM.

I'm getting to it, I promise

Readers, this is all done on the fly. I don't have an outline. Right now I'm working on Grandmas vist. Then there's Rob and Vicky the escort. Miranda and Hilda and Jackie. Sammie, hmmm well, Sammie will get mixed in too, but I won't say where. I'm in no hurry to wrap this up and it will not end in a huge fmaily/freinds/neighbors/UPS man and paprerboy gangbang. Remember, these are not normal people. They all have a very aggressive sex drive and, as such, a lowered level of morality, i.e. less rules. But I still need to keep it within the realm of plausibility and remember that even for these young libertines its all new and as such takes a little getting used to.BUT after all it is a fantasy story so I'll strecth that as much as possible.
Keep commenting. I enjoy the interest and have actually taken some of the suggestions.

I really enjoy this story series. I was dissapointed by ch. 5 but it is needed for the story. Thank you.

Take your time.

I'm still really enjoying this!
Please take your time with the subsequent chapters if you need to because I'm sure they'll be worth it.
Not really into mommy/son but this was a great little scene.
Rachael's character has me a little puzzled though. She doesn't seem as fleshed out as the others. I'll wait a few more chapters to see whether or not I can understand her a little better..　Can't wait to get a little time in Sammie's head.

Rob? Bob? Rachel/Rachael?

OK, we started with Rob in chapter 1, then Bob shows up at Rachel, later Rachael’s, college home. Bob plays a lot, and Rob comes back. It’s back in forth with these names ... I hope all the kids know who’s who. Author niemand1994, which names do you prefer here? Overall, though, the story is quite enjoyable, and we do appreciate your efforts on this romp series!

I loved it but it was too short.