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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/12/13

The "Anybody" point of view.

PLEASE, pick a name and use it. John, Steve, even Barbara, just NOT "you"!! I did not do anything with you so stop saying "you did {whatever}".

2 Paragraphs in and I'm sure I won't waste my time on this story. 1 star.

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by PickyKinky01/13/13

Thanks for the comment!

Shame you didn't leave a name so I could direct a personal response to you and ask what else was wrong with it in your opinion. All comments are welcomed! My story might not everyone's thing but I write for myself. If you like it then great, if not then never mind!

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by Anonymous01/17/13

fantastic

Well written and very sexy, more stories please ! .... Hector.

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by willrose02/05/13

Nice!

Wisht this were a film! Very hot. Hope we get to see what happens next! Thanks for writing.

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