Land of Huge Cocks Ch. 03

fucking hot wish i was one of the three guys

Wishful thinking

Oh how I wish some of this serum was really available for me.

Be careful what you wish for...

...You just might get it. Gina wanted to be fucked by a big cock and she did. She just didn't get to keep it. She lost her husband due to the big cock she tricked hin into getting. Now she knows that the green isn't always greener on the other side.
Man, this story was hot, though.

It WAS good...but...

Right up until the end, you had me on board. It was hot, it was sizzling hot, it was sexy and fun and I could ignore things like, "What about his facial hair?" or "Wouldn't his voice be a giveaway?" or even, "When did he change jobs again?"

Then you had that...thing on the end. The part where the wife was just tossed aside. The worst part is there's no story context, no clear reason for it to be happening. What, so s/he finds an alpha to ream her sphincter and suddenly the marriage evaporates? There was a relationship there, and sure, Simone could have been upset at the duplicity that resulted in the life change...if s/he'd ever found out about it. The sudden-ness of it, the absolute abruptness of Gina being dropped like a hot weapon at a drug bust, MAJOR turn-off!

The whole experience was like eating the most delicious peanut-butter-caramel-chocolate bon-bon you've ever experienced, then a tiny bubble of motor-oil pops in your mouth.

Gina lost a husband that she did not deserve.

It seems like you left out parts of this story in this chapter or rushed it through. How did Simon get this job and did Gina and Simon know what it was before he went to the mansion? It did not seem that Simon was planning to live at the mansion when they bought all of those clothes. Did Simon finally find out how he was changed and that Gina did it to him? Is that part of the reason that he left Gina; and that the sex at the mansion was better than with Gina? Does Simon know that he is being video taped when he is having sex in the play rooms? For Gina to change Simon without his consent and lie to him about it; she did not deserve to have him. She should have been happy to have a good husband with a 6 inch cock that loved her