All Comments on 'Locked in the Closet'

Please continue the story. That was a great read. It made me so hard.

That was a very good story like to hear more

Nice, fast, and very hot!! I love how it built up and the just exploded in lust. Keep up the good work!

The story line was great, the pool,the hot tub, and most of all THE MAGIC DOOR. You tell a good story, keep it up. New writers like you keep sites like LITEROTICA going. An keep the readers happy. PLEASE keep up the good work..LAROC OF AGES

Begging to be continued.

Oh HELL YES, home run, please continue/ bill

Your story was really hot and made me really wet! I cant wait for part two and I hope she never gets on the pill ;)

There is a new thing that has been happening lately and that is authors posting their stories in small pieces from 1 to more days apart. But with your story unlike theirs, is while it's short and down to the point there is a pay-off at the end, and on top of it it's well written, and a flat out excellent story. It's so good I still can't seem to find your secret on how you did that in so little words. Curious as to your 2nd story will be like or is this beginners luck. Let us see.

I hope the son actually made his mom pregnant. How they deal with her pregnancy could be the theme of a sequel to this. Please write one, & keep up the hot writing!

This is my first and last read of the night! Saved me time. As for my compliment to your story? I came twice. What better compliment is there? Thanks! :D

I really enjoyed this read. Hope to see more soon.

Please write more about them. Hope she gets pregnant

It was a very good story. I like it when it's only one page. The only thing that I don't like in these stories is, "I'm your mother and we shouldn't be doing this."I also have a problem with, "is she going to get pregnant?"

But all in all it was a good story.

Although I mostly enjoyed your story, I felt it was a bit rushed and lacked a lot of description. For instance, when he went down on his mum, remembering they've just been swimming, she also would have tasted of chlorine. Plus I was confused by the mechanics of the door. Assuming he'd knocked it closed with his foot suggests the door opened 'in' meaning they would then have had to 'pull' the door to open, not push [they would be pushing against the door jams]? Then to have the door 'magically' opened after their union was a bit too much to imagine. Overall though,I enjoyed your story but I did feel it lacked description and I felt a bit rushed. 3 Stars. M

Please write more stories. you are a good writer.

nice story looking forward to the second one

Nice story. Had a truthful feel to it. I prefer true stories. Whether this is one or not I don't know but it was still good. Usually if nothing is mentioned about it being based on actual events most likely it wasn't. I'd like to have a conclusion to this one anyway.

I hope that the author will continue with this very good story.

Perhaps mom won't feel that he is going to leave her when he finishes school, if she is pregnant with his baby.

Well done and hope to read more soon.

Thanks for the read.

LOVED IT!!

Notice how Jimmy goes right back to shooting more of his semen into his mother once he thinks he might have knocked her up. Lots of boys feel the way Jimmy does, they not only want to fuck their mom but they also want to fuck a baby up their mother's cunt. I'm sure that Jimmy in this excellent story did exactly that, he fucked a baby up where he was once a baby. From the boy's potent young balls to his mother's fertile mature womb!

I spent my sexually formative years masturbating to thoughts of fucking my mom. the premiss is a fine escape fantasy theme, in its brevity it conveys hidden desires surfacing to fruition. A young lads dream cum true, any semblance to reality is fleeting as mom caves from a kiss, and a few body rubs/frottage to set the sensors of the skin. Rather mom orchestrated the locked door, with a secreted key. Mom had decided it was time to get fucked by someone she really loved.

My mom has passed a few years back, so thanks for the memories. And we never fucked, I just wanted to.

very hot... this actually happened to me and my mom's housekeeper... it lead to a lot of hot fun for years after

i might not have this rare experience with my mom but would love to, more than a couple of times did i spy my mom and my dad making love. i was really aroused.

I blew seed after seed... Maybe you should edit out the ridiculous lines.

Hope she did get pregnant.tell her forget the pill just fuck her fill her cunt with your cum

I liked the story but I personally need indepth character development. I deem that the mother has treated her son as a developing man, instead as a child. She permitted him t make his own decisions as long as the decision did not cause har to himself or others. Due to her age, he had to grow up fast and assume some responsibilities early in life. This story would make a great series.