Oh - so Miranda's 'dedication' to work is only temporary... that makes it okay. Yeah, right. Seriously, this has been an excellent story so far - I am looking forward with anticipation to the remaining chapters of this tale. A true magnum opus!
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Anonymous01/09/13
Well now, this is certainly a sticky situation Rob and Rachael are in. Can't quite explain away this so easily. Though I get the impression they'll soon find out that Sammie isn't quite as innocent and unaware as they think she is. Looking forward to it ;)
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Anonymous01/09/13
Miranda will get what is coming to her if there is any justice in this world you've created. Love the story so far. Love all the characters except Miranda. She is a first class bitch!!!
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Anonymous01/09/13
Hot tale
Thanks for excellent father/daughter incest tale. Well written and still going strong, please keep up your great work.
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Anonymous01/09/13
Slight confusion.
In her chapter the mom says she had never done anything like that and never felt that way towards any woman, here she is mentioned to have licked some. ??
No other complaints other than the rather pointless discovering everyone has to do. Seriously, there is no secret, Sammie knew just as soon as Dad got home from visiting the college if not sooner.
The story as a whole is great, just some of the minor details that could be fixed. One, I don't know about you, but I haven't met any women that come as fast as they do in your story. Maybe you've seen differently but in my experience, it takes them a little while. Two, make sure you are spell checking and proof reading the story. It can e a little distracting when you have to go back over what you just read to clarify what it said. That's mainly it. Great story line!
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Anonymous01/15/13
Interesting Story
Nice hot sex scents, but as for the other details and characters upon which the story hangs, there are are numerous disconnects and contradictory elements are becoming a distraction. I understand that the characters are only fictional and the authors take some liberties for the sake of fantasies but unfortunately these characters are far from being real.
English
Temporary?
Oh - so Miranda's 'dedication' to work is only temporary... that makes it okay. Yeah, right. Seriously, this has been an excellent story so far - I am looking forward with anticipation to the remaining chapters of this tale. A true magnum opus!
Well now, this is certainly a sticky situation Rob and Rachael are in. Can't quite explain away this so easily. Though I get the impression they'll soon find out that Sammie isn't quite as innocent and unaware as they think she is. Looking forward to it ;)
Miranda will get what is coming to her if there is any justice in this world you've created. Love the story so far. Love all the characters except Miranda. She is a first class bitch!!!
Hot tale
Thanks for excellent father/daughter incest tale. Well written and still going strong, please keep up your great work.
Slight confusion.
In her chapter the mom says she had never done anything like that and never felt that way towards any woman, here she is mentioned to have licked some. ??
No other complaints other than the rather pointless discovering everyone has to do. Seriously, there is no secret, Sammie knew just as soon as Dad got home from visiting the college if not sooner.
This just gets better and better
The next chapters should be really hot.
Good
The story as a whole is great, just some of the minor details that could be fixed. One, I don't know about you, but I haven't met any women that come as fast as they do in your story. Maybe you've seen differently but in my experience, it takes them a little while. Two, make sure you are spell checking and proof reading the story. It can e a little distracting when you have to go back over what you just read to clarify what it said. That's mainly it. Great story line!
Interesting Story
Nice hot sex scents, but as for the other details and characters upon which the story hangs, there are are numerous disconnects and contradictory elements are becoming a distraction. I understand that the characters are only fictional and the authors take some liberties for the sake of fantasies but unfortunately these characters are far from being real.
You were off to a great start, with regular updates. What happened?
Nothing new for 2 weeks? What gives? I was really getting into your series.
Next chapter (s)?
Hope to read them soon.
memories
Old Fart with a lot of memories. I love these stories! Please do more to continue these fantasies!
Not who I expected in the doorway. Very hot!
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