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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill01/06/13

Pretty good

Suggest loosing the 'my''s they are understood and screw up the wonderful cadence begun in earlier stanza.
respects,
Harry

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by tazz31701/07/13

WANTING MORE

leads one to belive in non-satiation, TK U MLJ LV NV

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