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by MahVash

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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Pretty good

Suggest loosing the 'my''s they are understood and screw up the wonderful cadence begun in earlier stanza.

respects,

Harry

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WANTING MORE

leads one to belive in non-satiation, TK U MLJ LV NV

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