by stickygirl
Congratulations on a thoroughly convincing and beautifully written story. TG has never been my thing, but I found this both moving and arousing. Thank you.
Very well written, I loved reading this story. I was engulfed at once, the characters are alive, painted with well chosen words.
You captured the nerves, the fluttery feelings, the passion!! Bravo!!
I finally had a moment to read some of your work, I'm not surprised by your skill in painting with words. I can't recall if I've ever read a story that consists of one love scene, probably because it is a really hard thing to pull off with any success. I've known for awhile that you are a special and talented woman, now I know you play with words well too.
This is the first thing of yours I've read, Jane. Intense, wonderful, subtle, revealing. Just, simply, yes.