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Rescuing Layna Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by J0SE01/10/13

Oooooo! This story has caught my eye

Please continue

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by Anonymous01/10/13

:-)

YES.......please continue !!!!!!!

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by angelicbeauty01/11/13

Love it. Great story. I hope to see that she will be turned back human and what will happen

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Very Promising

Nice set up, characters stay in memory, interesting premise.

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