I've just reread the entire story to this point and have to say how much I am enjoying the eroticism of your tale. Very well crafted thus far, and please continue! We all want more.
I have noticed that in the stories thus far it is nearly Sunday again. When he goes to church on Sunday it would be nice to see and read about any soul searching he goes through, wondering why he is so turned on by humiliation. Not to mention the irony of seeing so many church goers (I'm looking your way Harold and Mildred, et al) sitting there in all their hypocritical glory.
Please write more soon. I am waiting excitedly for more!
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loved this chapter when is the next one coming out ,soon i hope ,xo
I love this series
I love where the series is going. Please I hope you make more, it's so hot :)
Awesome
I fucking love this story. Pleeease continue the series. :)
excellent story
I've just reread the entire story to this point and have to say how much I am enjoying the eroticism of your tale. Very well crafted thus far, and please continue! We all want more.
I have noticed that in the stories thus far it is nearly Sunday again. When he goes to church on Sunday it would be nice to see and read about any soul searching he goes through, wondering why he is so turned on by humiliation. Not to mention the irony of seeing so many church goers (I'm looking your way Harold and Mildred, et al) sitting there in all their hypocritical glory.
Please write more soon. I am waiting excitedly for more!
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