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Madison's Bikini

bySlightlyDisturbed©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/11/13

PROOF READ!!!!

"... had this hole love hate stereotypical sibling ..." - WHOLE!!
".. Her barley there baby blue string bikini ..." - BARELY!!

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by Anonymous01/11/13

spell

I so agree. Mis spelling is distracting and amateurish.

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by MoonlightCat01/12/13

enjoyed it

...Well except that proof read thing,that was hot.;)

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