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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/12/13

Proof read SVP

Was it Claire or Kaley. You need to be careful with names. It can be quite off-putting.

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by clairegerm01/23/13

Thank, Anon

I appreciate the comment and all of the votes! This was my first attempt at publishing something, and I have learned a lot!

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by markelly01/29/13

Nice...

A good read. Shame it’s this short though. The name change left me confused but I got over it as mistakes do happen. For a first attempt, a good read and well worth the time you took to write it. Thank you for posting it.

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