please.
has potential... let me know when you've posted the last chapter and I'll read the lot. hard to get interested with so little content.
Now, please!
liked it, but too short....write more
where's the plot, where's the bckground, where's the character development? this was way to rushed this should be chapter two and twice as long or longer. delete and do it properly.
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please.
ho hum
has potential... let me know when you've posted the last chapter and I'll read the lot.
hard to get interested with so little content.
Stop
Now, please!
xxxx
liked it, but too short....write more
ONCE AGAIN A FAIL
where's the plot, where's the bckground, where's the character development? this was way to rushed this should be chapter two and twice as long or longer. delete and do it properly.
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