A Disciplinary Hearing

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A very well written story. I love the language used.

You tell a story well. Nicely paced to build up the sexual tension in the characters. Good to see you placing yourself in the action. It makes it more believable.
Hope to see more Hannah.

What?

This is Non-Consent. Rape fantasies in the workplace. Oh, and the woman likes it. Not. Disgusting.

It was not well categorised

I had intended to put it in the group sex category, I am sorry that you did not enjoy reading this. I am unsurprised that it is not to everyones tastes. I am also aware of a number of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. I did not use word processor, rather I composed and uploaded straight from Literotica so was not prompted to make corrections. I should have proof read this and intend to do so next time. xxx

Good job!

Sure there's some errors, but I often wonder the people who point them out, do they ever submit a story? Small errors are one thing, dull ass writing another. It did seem a bit light on description, but doesn't make it wrong. All in all, I liked it and look forward to more of the same from you.