A Blinding Hate

Absolutely Disgraceful

So the US Army trains psychopaths to drug and arrange multiple rapes of women? And at the end they like it? You should be totally ashamed of yourself for posting this rebarbative rubbish. You've trashed your reputation.

TO REPAY MISGUIDED KINDNESS AND CARING

with horrible brutality leaves on open for payback in kind. TK U MLJ LV NV

For years commenters have been unhappy because your men are "always"

...wimps and cuckolds. You have chosen to go polar opposite on this story and the commenters are still not happy.
HMMMmmmmm?
How can you offend so many people? Just luck I guess!
The story was written well, no real issues with grammer or other issues. The real problem is that JPB has broken the mold and did not make him a cuck.
Keep trying different ideas. Maybe you will find something to make everyone happy, or not.
You are one of a dozen or so authors I always click on. Keep writing your stories your way. You will get complaints no matter what you do.

Nasty***

Real Nasty!!!!

5*

Just because of the previous negative comments, I felt like I should specifically mention here that I gave you five stars. All the readers: This is fantasy you people, get over it. True, its not exactly my cup of tea either. But I think that the story has a psychological aspect to it, and you have made a very good job of portraying the feelings of your main character. Well written.

I'm a Fan, But...

This one crosses several lines. Still, thanks for the effort.

Tad abrupt

It all ended abruptly, raw and without closure. The story seems complete in the respect of the kids revenge but open ended for continuance and/ or background and/ or Yolanda's story. A sequel maybe? I liked it even as it is.
I usually don't read NC, but read this only because you wrote it.
Please don't pay attention to idiots that can't or won't separate fantasy from reality. Plausible.
Thanks for the effort.

YES! my man bob really did a revenge story! 5

Sooo?

Did she?

Chuckle - thx!

Really...?

Piano, dancing lessons, and no car? That deserves a gang bang?

She wouldn't have been able to control shit when he left for college and it's really partly his fault he just accepted her at home and didn't make his dad choose.

I love a good revenge story, but in this case the guy came off sounding like a spoiled bitch who didn't get his way and needed to feel powerful by drugging and raping a grieving widow. Yeah, that'll show her who's boss...

Disappointing

This kid really deserves to be in jail.

Bill1104

Standard JPB unfinished ending

4 stars are pending an ending to this story

Ugh

This dipshit comes across like some of the assholes I knew in high school who thought the world revolved around them and what they wanted - a jerk with the emotional stability of a three-year old in a full-size body. She should have him tossed in the slammer and let him discover the joys of forcible rape.

worst one

To have some one rape let alone gang rape is inhuman. It is a life time of torture. For what a strict..... step mom? Well let see what happens when there is an uncaring parent. Child grow up drug, welfare, std, jobless.
Well there is more but jpb left me hanging....... i let him hang

Vomicable

One of your worst ever.

So far, so good, I thought it was very good.

However, it may just be me but I think Bob's story needed and ending... can't say that I have the ability to write it but I feel two or more chapters are needed as there are so many possibilities to this tale... I hope Bob adds further pats/chapters to it.... so many lose ends.... possibilities. I understand that 'suspense' is a good ploy and makes the reader think about the story and want to 'finish' the story themselves in their head... but Bob could do it better and, thus, let us know how he would finish it..... Thanks for a good read, Bob. Loved it thus far.

So...I'm wondering..

Is she going to start fucking him regular now or is she going to pretend to come on to him, drug him, and then have HIM gang-raped?

These 2 belong together in an earthly purgatory

Whatever she did was done out of love. It might not have been healthy love back then & is certainly less then that now. Regardless, he's paid her back 10 fold for whatever transgressions on her part. They need each other but communication should come first. Ask each other for forgiveness.

There is a bond between them that extends to the grave, no matter what. There is serious sickness there but with diligence they could complete each other.

I am starting at the top (again) to read all your works.

I did it once before and I remember some that you left unfinished (IMO) or stories where there was no revenge obtained, male or female. Also I don't like multiple choice on the endings although (when I read the 2nd or 3rd) some of the alternates I like. I often don't bother reading any of them because I am old and set in my ways. You are a very good and entertaining writer and I am running out of "revenge" stories that I have not read and so many of them are crap. Thank you for your efforts and I will not make negative comments even if you leave me boiling, LOL.

Good thing this wasn't the first story of yours that I read

Because if it was, it would also be the last!

get a life, obviously ur limp dick has to have drugs to get pussy.

how pathetic can a so called author get. the bitch deserved just punishment. ur sorbid mind don't get it. the last tale of urs I'll read.
1 star
1star

Twisted Story

This is way, way, below your standards JPB. I've noticed this decline the last couple of years.Has JPB dropped away, or even died, and someone is posing as him? What a bitch Yolanda was. Made her stepson learn how to dance and play a musical instrument. Skills that certainly make it easier to meet women. Made him keep his grades up. What a bitch!

Yeah, she crossed the line, by denying him a chance to participate in sports, and picking his college. He was right to break off relations. In any event what he did to Yolanda was way beyond what she deserved. Severing all contact would have been sufficient.

In the ARMY they take care of you...

First time I ever ate 3 squares a day. Almost went to Leavenworth Prisonin while in basic training, THeY TeLL You WHaT To Do, for your own good and others. Putting your character in the ARMY does not fit your story at all. Sorry, still a good one...

I was was honorably discharged, Bill

One Star

I have a blinding hate for this story.

absolute bollocks

as above

good as a story

the only emotion that moved me was the hate in juniors eyes and what he had done. whether she was sexy or not, she was and is his step mother. it was a story, I know, but that doesn't excuse the perpetrator from what he did to his mother. definitely a sick person. she may have been strict, but some are, just like some dads are strict. what he did should haunt him for the rest of his life.