All Comments on 'Breakfast in Bed'

by bluemono

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pixandwordspixandwordsover 11 years ago
A great start

Some really hot descriptive passages there! You're making my mouth water. I'm guessing is the first in a series... with "dinner" being part two? I'll be interested to see how it progresses.

woody1230woody1230over 11 years ago

ok you've peeked my interest. chapter 2 dinner in bed !!!

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