All Comments on 'College Roommates Meet'

anxiously awaiting chapter two...three...four....

from the title of the story you need a next chapter

nice pacing and characterization. cant wait for the next... :)

Write some more.

write a lot more

I think you could use a little more figurative language but good start

Shit sucked

not all black people talk like that

Pull the plug on chapter two homie

oh...what is in those pics?!

I liked it so far. I think you should post a second chapter.

So his parent helped him move and did not notice the pics...

This is pretty good. You have good pacing and your transitions are not bad, a little rough, but not bad. I'd recommend you get an editor, but I think everyone should get a second set of eyes whenever they write anything. So far I'm really enjoying your story, especial how you mention the pics, but leave what they are pics of to our imagination. :-) -DC

This Chapter is an excellent intro!

:-)