All Comments on 'Little One Ch. 04'

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BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
Too short

I know this is an old story and you will probably never see (much less reply) to this comment but why are the "chapters" so short? You could put them all together and make a few pages of a really good story. Just about the time it starts to pick up, it's the end of the chapter. It would also be nice to know how they know each other, how they got together, etc.

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