Am so pleased you posted this, was just going to email you! It's made my day! A seamless continuation and very vividly written, well done. Can't wait for the next chapter, now tell me is Jim going to cause more trouble? Does Ellie safe word on something or perhaps she makes Mel deliciously jealous? Oh the possibilies! Thanks. m.
Very well-written and hot - I really enjoyed this and the way you have written it. Thank you for sharing your marvellous talent with us and please bring us Chapter 2 very soon. Five stars, a big smile and hugs!
i totally enjoyed your work xelliebabex as its real honor to read such as masterpiece as it follows the previous series so perfectly. Bella accepting Mel as her Master was so perfect and well executed that i it found was the high point of the whole story
I LOVED that ending. The editing has been improving, but as I recommended before, if you have not read the story out loud to yourself yet, perhaps you should. It helps to catch errors that are harder to notice when just reading normally. I am so glad you wrote a sequel. It has me all excited. xoxo
Just how smart is it to let your dom fuck you with the tip of his filthy work boots? This is a common occurrence in bdsm stories and porn, but I just don't get it. The shoe has walked through all kinds of dirt and germs, and then he shoves it into her genitals? Eeeeek...
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Anonymous06/23/13
i agree with the previous comment
don't fuck her with your dirty shoe. how does a Dom care for her like that when he is exposing her to germs and disease..
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Beautifully realized story
I love this. Cant wait for the next chapters.
Hey your back!
Am so pleased you posted this, was just going to email you! It's made my day! A seamless continuation and very vividly written, well done. Can't wait for the next chapter, now tell me is Jim going to cause more trouble? Does Ellie safe word on something or perhaps she makes Mel deliciously jealous? Oh the possibilies! Thanks. m.
Mayness you have made my day and just to show you how grateful I am, chapter two should be published in the next day or two.
My friend Lem, Thank you your the best!
A fine story!
Very well-written and hot - I really enjoyed this and the way you have written it. Thank you for sharing your marvellous talent with us and please bring us Chapter 2 very soon. Five stars, a big smile and hugs!
I enjoyed
This immensely. As a writer also on this site I love your story. I am looking forward to more.
so nice
to see a continuation of the story between Mel and Bella, I hope you have many more chapters to share with us.
Thank you
perfectly done
i totally enjoyed your work xelliebabex as its real honor to read such as masterpiece as it follows the previous series so perfectly. Bella accepting Mel as her Master was so perfect and well executed that i it found was the high point of the whole story
Well done.
Hot scenes, very good emotional content.
I just found you
And read everything in one sitting. It's amazing!
Great!
Xellie, you are great! I absolutely loved the surrender on Bella´s submission... Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks!!!
Hell yeah
I LOVED that ending. The editing has been improving, but as I recommended before, if you have not read the story out loud to yourself yet, perhaps you should. It helps to catch errors that are harder to notice when just reading normally. I am so glad you wrote a sequel. It has me all excited. xoxo
yum
Loving every bit
Question
Just how smart is it to let your dom fuck you with the tip of his filthy work boots? This is a common occurrence in bdsm stories and porn, but I just don't get it. The shoe has walked through all kinds of dirt and germs, and then he shoves it into her genitals? Eeeeek...
i agree with the previous comment
don't fuck her with your dirty shoe. how does a Dom care for her like that when he is exposing her to germs and disease..
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